Wednesday, 19 September 2012

Dino Protectors

Once upon a time, five million years ago in the dino times, was a fort of dino's protected by humans guarding  the plant eaters from the meat eaters so they wouldn’t die. The people would protect and keep the dino's safe but they kept on escaping, and it was too hard to get them back in their habitat.
The humans thought of ideas to keep the dino in their habitats. Like getting more men from the future, that didn’t work. They tried paintball guns to shoot them back to their  habitat, but nothing seemed to work. They tried everything but they just couldn’t do it.
 It was a big problem and they nearly gave up, before someone thought of a solution to let the dino's out into the meat eater’s territory, so they know what it’s like to be eaten alive, so the dinos would stay in their habitat, and it worked. The dinos stayed in their habitats and the dino's never escaped again. 

3 comments:

  1. Very interesting ideas, Flynn. Did they watch the planteater dinos getting eaten, so that they would know not to go out again?
    Keep writing, Flynn. You have amazing ideas and it is great that you are sharing them with us on your Blog.
    Flynn, fix up dinos. Dinos is a plural. It is more than one dino. To make more than 1 dino, we add s, not apostrophe s.

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  2. No a game I was playing

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  3. This story caught my attention (although it could use a title!) The picture is extremely eye-catching! I especially liked the big words you used like Habitat, solution and territory - they make your writing sound scientific.
    Great blog design too Flynn - your sailing ships and lettering looks amazing.
    Mrs Death

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